Biggest Mary Sues of the Warrior Cat Universe

I'm sure we've all thought at least one character in the Warriors universe was a Mary Sue. In case you don't know, a Mary Sue (or Gary Stu, for male characters) is a character in the story that angsts about everything, is utterly perfect, and imbalanced compared to ther other characters. If you would like a more in-depth explanation, Google it.

Now, a Mary Sue (or heck, even Kitty Sue) is NOT just a character you don't like. Don't put characters up here unless you truly think they're unbalanced and either too generic/predictable or too overpowered. OCs will not be allowed. Feel free to put in plenty of cats, but I wouldn't recommend trying with the less well-known ones (such as cats in Codes of the Clans), as those are likely to just collect dust at the bottom of the list. Finally, please don't vote on a cat just because you think they shouldn't be called a Mary Sue. I may be new to this website and all, but I know that upvoting your favorite character to be recognized as an unbalanced one wouldn't be among the best of ideas.

Now, let the Listing Games begin, and may the odds be ever in the favor of your submitted cat!
The Top Ten
1 Dovewing Dovewing is a character in the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. She has pale gray fur with green, pr sky-blue, or pale gold eyes. Her first appearance is in the fourth arc, know as Omen of the Stars, in the book The Fourth Apprentice. She was part of the Power of Three, and her power was to hear and see things very far away, farther than any normal cat could ever do. Her parents are Whitewing and Birchfall,... read more

Dovewing is just very annoying in my opinion and she is nothing like her sister, though it breaks my heart because her and Ivypool would've been the best twins ever! And Dovewing just feels like a replacement of Hollyleaf, it didn't seem fair. Out of the blue she had these super-natural seeing powers that she probably would've told someone about before and not to mention Tigerheart and Dovewing are just an annoying couple. It doesn't seem right, not just because their both from another clan cause I have nothing against that, it's just, it doesn't seem to fit. And when she broke up with Tigerheart and went to Bumblestripe my mind went, UGH! Because Bumblestripe could do way better than her, I don't ship Dovewing with anyone and she's just an annoying character in general, she is a total mary-sue and I have no idea why people favor her.

Can everyone like chill for a moment and stop yelling at each other. They are fictional cats! Figments of another person's imagination, they are NOT real! Dovewing isn't real so please stop being mad at her there's no use in getting super mad at something that doesn't exist. I get it, I get angry a lot and put more anger in my rants than necessary, but at the end of the day you realize that these characters are not real, so theres no need to fight. She has her flaws, so does ivypool. Sure, you can hate her or Ivypool but is it too much to ask do it respectfully? I don't control anyone's actions or how they argue but I can plea them to be civil to each other, even when it's frustrating. Please.

2 Firestar Firestar is a character in the Warrior Cats series. He becomes the leader of ThunderClan after Bluestar. He is mates with Sandstorm and has two kits: Squirrelflight and Leafpool. Formerly a kittypet named Rusty, Firestar is killed by fatal wounds inflicted by the spirit of Tigerstar and a falling tree... read more

Why is he apart of every prophecy? The whole five cats from each clan thing, he wasn't apart of. Blood will spill Blood, that was an OMEN, it didn't really make anything bigger. Even the power of three, it was HIS kin. I liked Firestar, but he should've just been the greatly remembered leader if not a little less. He did a lot of things, so he had his spotlight. Jayfeather, Lionblaze, and Hollyleaf should've just had the spotlight. Then Dovewing replaces Hollyleaf, and above all, his final act of heroism took the place of someone like Ivypool or (FINALLY) Hollyleaf.
His character was stretched too much. He should've just been the cat to face Tigerstar, like he sorta hoped in Darkest Hour.

Okay, I am on The Power of Three, but what the fridge is wrong with Firestar? I remember him as a nice, forgiving cat from The Prophecies Begin... Now he's a weirdo. I mean, I can't even explain him! I don't think he's a Gary stu and I don't hate him for killing Stupid Scourge but the fact that they HINTED that he favored Leafpool for having the prefix "-Leaf" like Spottedleaf is bad. Also, there's proof because she broke THREE codes and was stripped off of medicine cat duty then put back again! Poor Mapleshade. Also, the fact that her punishment as an apprentice was going to the WindClan patrol with the cats. Really? He used to be my role model.

3 Spottedleaf Spottedleaf was a medicine cat under Bluestar's leadership in the forest territories. She was born as Spottedkit to Adderfang and Swiftbreeze alongside her littermates, Redkit and Willowkit. Initially, Spottedpaw was apprenticed to Thrushpelt; however, she decided to become a medicine cat with Featherwhisker as her new mentor. After earning her medicine cat name, Spottedleaf received a prophecy from... read more

Spottedleaf is so annoying. She has practically no flaws, she's pretty, polite, perfect, has all her herbs memorized and has a deep connection with star clan like a good little medicine cat should. Boring! I like Sandstorm much better. She does have a lot of good qualities like being one of the best hunters in the clan but she has negative qualities to balance in out like being headstrong and unwilling to accept help. She's a bully at first but when Fireheart saves her, her gratitude starts blossoming into affection, but she's still hesitant to change completely, giving them much more time to bond as friends, and more time for Fireheart to realize he loves her, strengthening their relationship once it begins. It's a way more realistic and enjoyable process than love at first sight which is solely based on looks, and what Firepaw and Spottedleaf had.

Spottedleaf is so annoying! Why would anyone ship her with Firestar? She's such a weirdo, and I have my reasons for calling her that. Here they are:

1. She's a stalker! She follows Firestar through his dreams and the dreams of his kin, yet always disappears too early to tell him anything useful.

2. EVERYONE thinks she was 'reborn' as Alderheart. Alderheart is a TOM. A T-O-M. He cannot be Spottedleaf because Spottedleaf is a she-cat!

3. Some people just can't grasp the fact that Firestar loves Sandstorm. Spottedleaf was a minor obstacle before Firestar had to choose his true soulmate. She once tried to drag him so deep into StarClan that he could never return to the living Clans.

4. She started out as a warrior apprentice and fell in love with a cat who went to the Dark Forest when he died. Though I actually prefer this ship over her and Firestar because she's also evil, isn't she? She became technically insane after being separated from Firestar, as she died watching a ShadowClan cat steal a queen's kits without making a single move to stop him.

5. It's just unrealistic that she and Firestar would fall in love so quickly when she only said one or two lines to him. They shouldn't have felt anything close because Spottedleaf was much older and more skilled at the time. Her first and last words to Firestar were, "Get back to camp. He needs to rest," in - like - chapter three of Into the Wild.

6. She didn't give the gift of love to approve Firestar's choice of Sandstorm. She used it. She wanted Firestar to love her back, even if he already had kits and a true mate in the living world. She wanted Firestar to use the gift of love in such a way that when he came to StarClan, he would think he'd be greeted by his one'true' mate while leaving Sandstorm behind. This did not happen, though.

7. The fact that some people say Firestar will choose Spottedleaf over Sandstorm in StarClan is a lie. By the time Firestar dies,... more

4 Jessy

So much wasted potential! I still haven't read Bramblestar's Storm, but I know quite some information about her. She and Bramblestar maybe could have been together? Honestly, I think it would have been interesting while I was reading Visions of Shadows to find out that Bramble is with a former-kittypet, and that Squirrelflight was okay and moved onto a new tom. I would have liked to see Squirrel with a different ThunderClan tom who actually loved her! Yet, Bramble and Squirrel remained the same from before the whole Holly, Jay, and Lion fiasco started up. And I'm really questioning why? They could have forgiven each other and moved onto new mates, and more people might have liked that! But no! I'm just sort of disappointed with the new plots of the newer books. Sure, the Apprentice's Quest wasn't the absolute worst, but it had a lot of boring things in it. I really would have liked to see Alder and Spark with a new father! But their father is just Bramblestar in that book. I would have loved for Jessy and Bramble to get together if she wasn't just a brown Squirrelpaw with, for some reason, amazing skills. But please, just take this opinion with a grain of salt.

5 Millie Millie is a character in the Warriors series. She's a small, short-furred light gray tabby with blue eyes and a torn ear. Also current mate of Graystripe and mother of Bumblestripe, Blossomfall and Briarlight.

Millie isn't a sue in the slightest. She looked nothing like Silverstream, and had to work so hard to get into Thunderclan with Graystripe. He only chose her because Graystripe truely loved her like he did Silverstream. She helped Graystripe, yet didn't always succeed. She was hurt, and I think blinded by getting hit with briars or brambles before arriving in the loner barn with those who helped her and such. Plus, Millie was the one to stand up to the dogs, and knew how to deal with them, but she also has some flaws to pull her weight with her good traits. In my opinion, Graystripe had many reasons to fall in love with her. Millie saved his life on multiple occasions, encouraged him, helped him, and made sure he kept his sanity. She was kind, but also clumsy, and couldn't exactly get hunting or fighting on the first try. Not at all.

She isn't a sue at all. Just because she has a talent learning to be a warrior doesn't make her perfect. She wasn't the best mother, she went overboard with being overprotective of briar light, even if her reasons understandable, and she has complexity in her character and lots of development with graystripe unlike silverstream. She was never described to be pretty, the only possible way they might have confirmed that is she looks like silverstream in a way, but I think that's just because their both silver tabbies, and not every silver tabby is beautiful even if a lot of them are.

6 Lionblaze Lionblaze is a character in the Warrior Cats series. He is part of The Three, along with Jayfeather and Dovewing, and has the power of being undefeated in battle. However, the power if removed from him after the Clans are saved from the Dark Forest. Lionblaze is a broad-shouldered, muscular, bright, golden tabby tom with amber eyes the color of the sun. He has thick fur, thick fluff ringing around... read more

Here ladies and gentlemen is the BIGGEST Mary Sue in Warriors, Lionblaze! He is literally invincible! When he was just a kit he bet a fox. A fox! He's just a kit and he a fox that's bigger than him and could kill him easily! Thank you Warriors you have won an award for making a canon sue. He can win any fight but lost only once because he wanted to show Cinderheart he could control his powers. He even bet Tigerstar like What the heck! He was still young too and look at Tigerstar. Tigerstar is a senior warrior who is really strong and is still training in Dark Forest. Now he's another reason he's a sue, almost everyone loves him expect for a few. Cinderheart and Heathertail like him! I absolute hate him. I hope they make another book in Warriors where he actually loses a battle not on purpose either.

I wouldn't call Lionblaze a complete Gary sue, but I also think that he is probably one of the closest you get in warriors. He is my least favorite character, not because he is invincible and stuff (which is such an annoying Gary sue power), but because he has a bland personality and he doesn't really make in progress in the books. In the end of The Power of Three (spoilers), Jayfeather and Hollyleaf are figuring out who they're parents are while Lionblaze doesn't even care. I'd always sigh when there were Lionblaze chapters because he is just so bland while the other two have such interesting and real personalities.

7 Silverstream SIlverstream is a character created by Erin Hunter to the book series named Warrior Cats. Silverstream is a sleek, soft, and thick-furred, slender, silver -and-black tabby she-cat with a finely shaped head, and bright blue eyes. She's the daughter of Crookedstar and Willowbreeze, former mate of Graystripe and mother of Feathertail and Stormfur. She used to be a Riverclan Warrior/Queen before joining... read more

How the hell is Silverstream in this list? Sure, she's pretty and nice and saves Graystripe, but let's list out her flaws:
- She's pretty annoyed easily
- She's a brat
- She doesn't really respect people
So yeah, those are some pretty crappy flaws already. And I personally like Silverstream more than Millie. To be honest, I feel like Silverstream saves Graystripe just so it wasn't a hassle if someone spotted her ignoring a drowning cat who didn't know how to swim. Plus, it was leaf-bare. Then I would say that she probably hated Graystripe at first, but then Graystripe possibly pressured her into a relationship, which ended with her dying by bleeding to death.

She's a bit Mary Sue. I've been doing this thing where I defend all the cats and give reasons that they're not Sues/Stus, or at least not AWFUL Sues/Stus, but Silverstream wasn't well written enough to merit all the love she gets from the fans. If she got more time and development, then she could likely be one of the best supporting characters that died in one book, but as she is, she's a bit boring to read about. Yes, she has clear flaws and and goes through real hardships, but the way that she's written ignores her flaws, and skims over what could be one of the most interesting conflicts in that book, and THAT is why she is a Sue.

8 Squirrelflight Squirrelflight is a dark ginger she-cat with forest-green eyes. She has one white paw, short legs, a torn ear tip, glossy fur, and a long, squirrel-like, bushy tail. She has a scar running from her chest to the top of her hind leg along her right flank. She is a cat in the series called Warrior Cats. Her father is Firestar, her mother is Sandstorm, and her sister is Leafpool.

For all of the people that agree with Squirrelflight should be on this list, give it up. I have an argument! First of all, as an apprentice, Squirrelflight was very stubborn and may I say even a bit rude. She wasn't the most Mary-Sue cat, and it's definitely not unlikely that a young child would have that personality. Then, when she was on the Great Journey, Squirrelflight formed a close bond with Brambleclaw, which practically changed her personality. And I can relate to that, for meeting my two best friends changed mine, too. Then she had to choose between ONLY Ashfur and Brambleclaw, and she saw the SAME SENSE so may other people would see, and chose Brambleclaw, because they were so close, while Ashfur was just a close friend to Squirrelflight. Next Squirrelflight chose to help Leafpool and take in her kits, even if that meant she would one day have to BEG Ashfur to let them out of a fire, and tell him her secret. Lastly, I would like to point out Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight's love was practically love at first sight, WAY before Brambleclaw was even DEPUTY.

Squirrelflight is not a Mary Sue. I REST MY CASE.

9 Tigerheart Tigerheart, now known as Tigerstar, is a fictional character created by Erin Hunter for the book series named Warrior Cats. He became more important to the plot after gaining his own book, Tigerheart's Shadow. He was one of the cats to have worked as a spy on the Dark Forest. Now he currently is the strong leader of Shadowclan and mate of former ThunderClan warrior Dovewing. And on the new arc, The... read more

I'm sorry. Don't they mean Tigerstar number 2? Just saying. Tigerstar 1 died by Scourge so this is TIGERSTAR 2. Can people just stop using tiger for once so that we don't have a tigerstar 3? Omg. Tigerstars and Tigerstars and what about Bramblestar? Can't you use something similar to tiger instead of tiger for once?

Ugh he abounded his clan when they needed him the most and returned when it suited him, and his mate dovewing is a Big marry sue One time she said ivypool was jealous of her and she quats "no wonder hollyleaf isn't part of the prophecy she killied a cat! "

Almost as bad as Dovewing. Obviously Dovewing would have chosen him. They were a perfect MaryxGary Sue couple. Bumblestripe, rip them up, will you?

10 Onestar Onestar is a fictional character from the book series "Warriors" by Erin Hunter. He is/was a WindClan leader, and is mottled, small, brown tom cat.

Onestar isn't a Gary-Stu. Everyone likes Onewhisker better than Onestar, of course. We all know the reasons. As a warrior, Onewhisker was very loyal to WindClan, but still a good friend to Firestar. As leader, he was too keen on proving that WindClan didn't need help from other leaders. But I think he was like this because of other leaders calling him second to Firestar. He probably took it too seriously and starting going totally against ThunderClan, especially when he and his Clan raided ThunderClan and failed. They ran away without saying anything, cowards. I just hope he'll loosen up a bit in the future, and maybe restore his friendship with Firestar in StarClan when he dies.

I don't have much to say. I think Onestar sucks. I have a feeling people are misunderstanding what Mary Sue really means. If you don't like the character (if you don't, me too), it doesn't always mean that they're a Mary Sue (I am so tired of typing every possible thing someone might call a Mary Sue I'm just going to use 'Mary Sue'). It means that a character is too perfect (ABSOLUTELY NOT TRUE), they're good at everything, etc. It doesn't always mean they're a brat. Again, I think Onestar sucks. Though, that's just my opinion.

The Newcomers

? Sunbeam

I also cannot like her in this series. She is a bland cookie cutter cardboard of a character who has no agency whatsoever. Her mother apparently is a bad cat when the new code opens the possibility of a rapist joining the Clan of their victim/most coveted victim. It still isn't against the code, meaning that it's perfectly acceptable. Her mother was worried that her kits would end up with/turn out to be rapists. She may have used Needletail to 'manipulate' Sunbeam, but it's because she genuinely did care about her. Anyone who doesn't like it = bad in the warrior cats fandom.

? Shadowsight

I don't like him in THIS series. He apparently was groomed (as a victim of this, it really upsets me) by a cat who was FLANDERIZED.
'You're mad because he didn't know better, was emotionally abused by Mothwing, Lionblaze wanted to kill him at least once- maybe twice. You're horrible for not liking him!'
Have you noticed there's literally nobody in this series who dislikes him who is painted as a cat who is normal? Even Mothwing falls into this category.
'She changed her mind after he saved the Clans.'
Yeah. Because nobody really cares about THE DEATH OF HIS COUSIN. THE CAT WHO IS HER GREAT-GRANDMOTHER ON HER FATHER'S SIDE SHOULD HAVE BEEN MORE UPSET. Apparently, she was 'heroic' to the point that she decided he wasn't so bad.
And I think nobody understands what Lionblaze was feeling. The writing in this series has gone REALLY downhill. It hasn't gotten better like everyone says. Most of these cats as POVs are complete and blatant Mary Sues/Gary Stus. I don't use those terms lightly. It feels like a bad fanfiction.
Not to mention the fanservice. The only reason Ivypool was appointed deputy by a pedophile that the fandom overall loves (Squirrelstar/Squirrelflight) is because she is a she-cat. THAT'S LITERALLY IT. I AM NOT GOING TO READ ANYTHING PUBLISHED AFTER MOTH FLIGHT'S VISION. NOT ANYMORE. I WILL SKIM THROUGH SUMMARIES. BUT THAT'S IT.

The Contenders
11 Leafpool Leafpool is a character in the Warrior Cats series. She's the daughter of Firestar and Sandstorm, sister of Squirrelflight, mate of Crowfeather, and mother of Jayfeather, Lionblaze, and Hollyleaf

Seriously? How did this get up here? Okay, I admit that you can see Leafpool as a Mary Sue for being a medicine cat, having forbidden love, and way more reasons, but SERIOUSLY? I love Leafpool (though I have to admit I like Squirrelflight better). Though that's just my opinion and I am aware that most people with common sense would hate me for defending someone just because I like them. You might think that forbidden romance is overrated and stuff, but then, Warriors is full of forbidden loves that I'm curious why you're reading it at all. I know that she is peaceful, blames herself for the death of her mentor, and etc. I don't know why people don't like that. I mean, it might be overrated, there are a lot of peaceful cats and cats that blame themselves for the death of other cats, but just imagine what would happen if Leafpool was really war frenzy (which some of you will call overrated, again, and just simply hate her), and she just blamed Cinderpelt herself, or Sorreltail, maybe and think that she was still an awesome apprentice to Cinderpelt. I have a feeling that she will be your new least favorite character if that happened. Again, I am very fond of Leafpool, so my words might not be that... trustworthy.

12 Feathertail Feathertail is a fictional character created by Erin Hunter for the book series called Warrior Cats. She's a slender, silver-tabby she-cat with sky-blue eyes and a plump tail. She is the daughter of Silverstream and Graystripe, Stormfur's sister and Crowfeather's first love interest. She used to be a Riverclan warrior before joining Starclan... read more

Well, there is a steep hill argumement on if she's a mary sue or not. I think she is. She's described as kind, pretty, gentle, a weakling, and looks a lot like her mother, who could have easily been described as the prettiest she in the clan. She attempted a forbidden relationship, while knowing her mother died from a forbidden relationship. Ignoring tradgedy in favor of instinct is pretty stupid for such a loyal clan cat, and it doesn't make since either. She was always so nice, but then argues when Stormfur and kills Sharptooth. Logic? I agree that she's a stereotypical girl from the 40's.

I can sorta agree with this. I've never really thought she was a Mary-Sue, but I don't like her. I've always favored Stormfur. I hated how she would argue with Stormfur when the sweet lil bean Storm was just trying to protect her and help her not beak the warrior cat's code. I felt betrayed by the author(s? ) of the series when they made Feathertail all of a sudden the new main cat of the prophecy.

13 Brightheart Brightheart is a character from Warriors by Erin Hunter. She is a white she-cat with ginger patches. As an Apprentice she got attacked by dogs and got half of her face torn off. Her mate is Cloudtail and her kits are Whitewing, Ambermoon, Dewnose, and Snowbush.

SHE IS 100% A MARY SUE. And about Lostface, just because Cloudtail loves her doesn't mean she should become Brightheart. Stormkit became Crookedkit. No cats argued. Sparrowpelt lost half his tail. White-eye loses an eye and becomes one-eye. Any arguments from cats? No. Hopkit becomes Deadpaw. Any arguments? No. Dashpaw becomes Maggottail. ARGUMENTS? No. If any cat argued, it would probobaly stay the same. Just because Cloudtail argued doesn't make it any different, LOSTFACE!

She is just straight up predictable. Even her name sounds like a mary-sue. BRIGHTHEART.
You can't tell me that doesn't sound like one.

I say she is a Mary-Sue because everyone took their rime out to stay with her, but what about Cinderpelt? Only Yellowfang took time out of her last days to help her. I was also alright with Lostface, because what about Stormkit? He had an accident and now he is Crookedkit. Guess how many fans cared? Like, none. Sparrowpelt too? He lost half his tail. White-eye is dragged into this Name-change too. Hopkit becomes Deadpaw. And Dashpaw? Oh I didn't forget you. Now, you are Maggottail. This is one of the most hated Warrior Cat names! White-eye lost her eye, but does the fans care about her new name, One-eye? No? Well does this story sound familiar? Of course, Brightheart! You only cared about beauty. Crookedkit's mother abandon him!

14 Star Flower

Yeah, no, total Mary Sue. Her "loyalty" is all over the place, and she plays with the emotions with pretty much all the toms ever. I mean, really? And she puts on the water-works when her father is murdered, but then becomes mates with one of the cats who wanted him dead? I want to trust her now that she is Clear Sky's loving mate, but I can't: she's always seemed just naturally evil. She's manipulative, secretive, and treats toms like objects.

She's constantly described as beautiful and stunning, etc, and she attracts the attention of THREE tomcats (if you count Slash, which was implied). Her personality changes according to the plot. In one scene, she's kind and supportive. In another, she'll be a badass fighting machine. One scene later she's a damsel in distress. She is also the center of a creepy love triangle. (Between the dad or his kid, really? ) Just, ugh. The Erins tried too hard this time.

15 Ivypool Ivypool is a fictional character created by Erin Hunter for the Book series named Warrior Cats. Ivypool is a common silver-and-white tabby. She spied in the Dark Forest and has dark blue eyes. She is the sister of Dovewing and the kit of Whitewing and Birchfall. Her mate is Fernsong, and she is the mother of Flipclaw, Bristlefrost, and Thriftear.

Bleh I'm throwing up dove wing and holly leaf.
1. Holly leaf is like the best and dove wing is the worst
2. Dove wing wasn't exactly very friendly towards holly leaf. I remember when holly Jay and lion would talk privately and now they keep things from her. I find it revolting that lion blaze once thought to himself 'I don't think holly leaf will harm dove wing' OF COURSE SHE wouldn't!
3. Holly leaf was more of a sister to ivy pool than her own sister when holly leaf actually saved ivy pool instead of tripping up in worry and wining like dove wing. You person make me sick

The people who think this is Sue, you need a check up, okay? Ivypool struggled over and over again and Dovewing gets everything on the first time.
Whitewing: Have a little nightmare about Swoop for the first time in your life darling?
Dovewing: Yeah mom. (smiles like a Sue)
Whitewing: Come here my darling.
Ivypool: Mom, I've been having nightmares since I was a apprentice.
Whitewing: (Still looking at Dovewing) Deal with it. Your sister has so many more problems.

16 Jayfeather Jayfeather is a character in the Warrior Cats series. He is part of The Three, along with Lionblaze and Dovewing, and has the power to read other cats' minds, emotions, and walk into other cats dreams, He was born blind. according to the Warrior Cats Wiki Jayfeather is a lean, mottled, pale gray tabby tom with blind, pale blue eyes like a jay's wing. He has thin and silky fur, and a scar running down... read more

Spoiler warning. =/

I don't exactly hate him but I don't like him either. I don't notice many things actually bad happening to him! Even if he has powers to know what others are thinking, and look into other cat's dreams, he's still blind. He fell in a hole once. ONCE people. He is BLIND for corns sake. I realize that he is actually trying to not fall in things and trip over things, but seriously. Around 99% of the time he is perfect, and the 1% is when he threw the stupid stick in the lake and almost got Firestar drowned. Even when Flametail drowned, he didn't act like anything wrong had happened and he went back to his normal perfect life. Mary. Sue.

Jayfeather is always challenged by the narrative, and that's the true definition of "Mary-Sue" or "Gary-Stu". What, did you want Jayfeather to weep for days when Flametail died, and be traumatized? He has Clanmates to treat, you know, he couldn't grieve about ShadowClan's medicine cat forever. He plenty of times falls/trips/walks into things, like in Sunrise when he walked into the brambles, Eclipse he got scratched by a thorn, and more. He's snappy and moody, and that's not being perfect. How would you feel if you were blind and all you had was a blind elder also to share feelings with? I mean, he was annoying sometimes, but still, but his blindness really is tragic, and he never had a "perfect life".

17 Goldenflower

Goldenflower has her own fair share of flaws, who ever wrote this can't see that.
Pluse she is one of the only peple who has reason behind hateing her (former) mate.
Honestly, why, just why?

I honestly have zero idea how Goldenflower got here. Like what? I'm actually confused

18 Scourge Scourge is a villain the Warrior Cats series. He's the leader of BloodClan. He was bullied by his siblings, Socks and Ruby, in the past because he was the smallest out of his kin. One of his most notable features is his collar of dog teeth. Scourge is a small black tom with one white paw, ice-blue eyes, glossy fur, and a torn left ear. He has a purple collar studded with teeth from dogs and cats,... read more

Ok It seems no one Actually Understands the Definition of a mary sue. It's some one who IS overpowered AND that they have no explanation for that power. for example, Lionblaze is a good fighter, but he was part of the prophecy that gave him the power to be invunreable. As for scrouge, he killed tigerstar easily because He had dog Teeth on his claws(or dog claws not entirely sure), Sure he scared it away, but not to mention he takes Out one of Firestar's Lives, who is no bad fighter and As he is the leader Of a clan that is held together by fear he had to have some good fighting skills.

Scourge is over powered. That's all I'm going to say. He had a terrible upbringing, got very strong and powerful, (although he's JUST bigger than an apprentice.), almost took over the forest with a random clan he formed out of the blue from loners with little to no fighting experience, took out two leaders, both being almost twice his sized, and got killed by the second one after killing him the first time. He always got what he want because people feared him, and then was just randomly killed out of the blue.

1. Sappy Backstory
2. Becomes really strong when he was very weak.
3. Had no real training
4. Formed a clan from nowhere out of untrained loners.
5. Somehow almost dominates the forest
6. Takes out two leaders
7. Gets killed.

That chain of events doesn't make since.

19 Bramblestar Bramblestar is the leader of ThunderClan. His mate is Squrrielflight and his kits are Dandilionkit, Juniperkit, Sparkpelt and Alderheart. Bramblestar sister is Tawnypelt, his parents are Goldenflower and Tigerstar. Bramblestar is a huge and muscular dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes, he has sleek fur, long claws, and a scar on his shoulder.

WHAT?!
Is a Gary-Stu tempted to kill his own leader?
Does a Gary-Stu argue CONSTANTLY with his mate?
NOPE.
And his closest friends are pretty much either gone or distant.
Ashfur? He backstabbed him, and then he got killed.
Feathertail? Dead.
Stormfur? With the Tribe.
Jessy? Who knows where she went?
Crowfeather? Well...we all know what Crowfeather can be like...
Tawnypelt? Loyal to ShadowClan.
Squirrelflight is the only one that's still around.
He doesn't even have hardly any close friends! In my opinion he's not even that good of a leader, with the exception of Bramblestar's Storm he was much better as a warrior and a deputy then he ever was and ever will be as a leader!

Yup, Bramblestar is a Gary-stu. HAHAhaha... This is officially the stupidest list I have ever seen. Squirrelflight was never even described as pretty! He doesn't even have that many friends! Feathertail and Stormfur are gone. Crowfeather's returned to his prickly old self. Ashfur pretty much backstabbed him by working with Hawkfrost, claiming he was not trustworthy, and insisting Leafpool made up a StarClan sign. He wasn't even temporary deputy! Graystripe was officially pronounced dead, they even had a funeral. Brambleclaw was officially deputy. It's like a deputy deciding to retire. If for some reason the deputy wants to be a warrior again, he's not going to be reinstated as deputy.

Bramblestar was tempted to kill his own leader. Gary-stu? NOPE. He was the son of Tigerstar, and had to struggle to prove his loyalty to his own Clan just because of his looks. Gary-stu? NOPE. He and Squirrelflight argued a lot. Gary-stu? For the third time, nope. Even though he knew Tigerstar was evil, he still listened to him. Gary-stu? Absolutely not. He couldn't forgive Squirrelflight for a long time. Gary-stu? NO. He continues to be surprised when kittypets turn out to be good fighters even though his mentor and former leader was one. Gary-stu? No!

20 Whitestorm Whitestorm is a fictional character in the Warriors novel series by Erin Hunter. He is a long-haired, sturdy, white tom with green eyes, and is known for his loyalty, wisdom, and calm demeanor. Whitestorm is a senior warrior of ThunderClan and has served as a mentor to many young apprentices. He is respected and admired by his clanmates for his courage in battle and his unwavering dedication to the... read more

What did poor, innocent WHITESTORM do to get up here? He's such a great cat! If Bluestar knew that someone said this, she would call their ears off.

Why is he on here. Just because he's the kit of Snowfur and Thistleclaw doesn't mean he's a Gary stu.

Seriously so he was deputy so what he was wise so what that makes him a stu!? one of my favorite characters

heres some reasons why he is an anti stu

his mother dies when he is a kit!?
his father is the one who makes tigerstar evil
he dies like a day or two after he was made deputy for crying ou loud
signed moonstorm of nightclan

21 Gleamstar

Yes, it's Stargleam!
May be a Mary Sue, but when I rewrote her story (changed her name, changed title) I kinda grew attached to her.
In the original...she was kinda bad, and I found myself liking Jazzpaw WAY more.
But, lesson learned: redo a character, love the character.

All right first of all... HER WARRIOR NAME WAS STARGLEAM, she was revived by starclan TWICE. she was revived to give out the ten, oh no sorry, 11 commandments. she is loved by ashfur, hawkfrost, blackstar and everyone else. she chose her leader name, became leader when firestar was still alive and chose her leader name which may I add while gleamstar is a pretty name, it is her warrior name flipped. she also had a prophecy when she was born. Plus she had kits in a lesbian relationship, lot long after being against gay relationships

I'm glad Gleamstar/Starkit isn't a Canon cat in the books, she is way to like a Mary Sue to be taken seriously.

22 Brook Where Small Fish Swim

Once again, a cat added because someone didn't like her, not because she's a Mary Sue.

Ugh. Brook should go die in a hole.

23 Oakheart Oakheart is a dark,reddish-brown tom with amber eyes.

Oakheart was a deputy of RiverClan under Hailstar’s and Crookedstar’s leaderships in the forest territories. He was born as Oakkit to Rainflower and Shellheart, along with his brother, Stormkit. He and his brother were very close, but when Stormkit broke his jaw, Oakkit was suddenly favored by their mother. Oakkit became an apprentice... read more

Ok, I really like Oakheart, but you hate to admit, he's a bit of a Gary-Stu, just a bit though. I mean he has a few flaws, like being extremely arrogant, but everyone loves him and thinks he's sooo brave and handsome, and blah, blah, blah. So I have to agree with this one.

I do sort of see Oakheart as a bit of a Gary Stue, but I've only read about him from Bluefur(star)'s point of view. What I didn't get was his and blue's love. I mean, is it just me, or did they rush into things? How well did they even know eachother? Like, sorry if I'm wrong, but didn't they only meet (go on a proper date thingy) ONCE before Bluefur had their kits?

Most people would not agree, but I find Oakheart a TOTAL gary-stu. He acts like a jerk to Bluefur/Bluestar, and suddenly- oops, Bluefur/bluestar is expecting his kits! He seems too... Annoying in an unrealistic way.

24 Crowfeather

Well, he is pretty torn up on the inside, but he is kind of imbalanced...
He loves Leafpool and her kits more than he loves Breezepelt.
He broke a warrior and a med code and he didn't want to but he loved Leafpool and couldn't help it... I guess you can say this doesn't make him Gary Stuish, but he is always getting in the way when ThunderClan comes to speak with WindClan.

Ok. This is the most unreal list ever. Crowfeather is the greatest character ever, and I both mentally and physically cry every time I think about making Crow x Feather fan art. Or Crow x Leaf fan art. I also have a statue of him I made by my bed.

Now where should I start...? Ooooh,I remember he went into a little battle there was this sweet little kitty named Leafpoop.He saved her and then they magically fell in love they ran away with each other betrayed their clans he went back got a mate he didn't even love and thanks to him Breezepelt is Breezepelt.The utterly horrible end.Not to mention he got a cat stuck in the Darkforest.

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