Top 10 Worst Creepypastas

These short horror stories are TERRIBLE in my opinion.
The Top Ten
1 Jeff the Killer Jeff the Killer is a creepypasta usually accompanied by a picture of a white face looking in to the camera smiling in an unsettling manner. The creepypasta is also usually accompanied by the term "Go to sleep".

The fact that so many people are calling this "well-written" is honestly insulting to legitimate writers. The plot is incredibly contrived and unrealistic, every character is flat with no personality (especially Jeff, who flips from perfectly normal with occasional "strange feelings" to a homicidal sociopath in a second), and 99% of Jeff's injuries are ridiculous (after being lit on fire, his skin turned white, lips red, and hair black? How scientific! Not to mention how Jeff hasn't gone blind from dust and bacteria after burning his eyelids off, and how his cliche knife-carved "smile" hasn't gotten infected without medical treatment). The scariest thing about this story is its picture, which, after a couple years, has become very dated and obviously photoshopped (also, isn't Jeff supposed to be in, like, high school? The picture is clearly a grown man).

At first I thought this was generally scary, but then when I got my science classes, I knew immediately that this was...wrong. Wrong in so many ways. He gets burned and bleached, but his skin turns white, lips crisp and red, and his hair black? That wouldn't even fit in biology, let alone science. His carved smile hasn't got infected without medical treatment, since he runs around in the woods and all. His eyes haven't burned up from the sun via not being able to blink, nor has he gone blind in the least. He goes from casual teenager to someone with "weird feels", and then a complete psycho in one chapter. LOGIC.

2 Clockwork: Your Time is Up

This story is stupidity incarnate. At first I couldn't stop laughing. Then I found the original on Wattpad. It make me sick to my stomach. It made me so mad that I looked up the author of said story. When I wrote then, they told me that all of what happened to Natalie, happened to them. Now, don't get me wrong. It's very possible that something like this Could happen. But then they went on to say that they wanted to educate people of the problem... Then I got upset. You don't educate people of Serious issues, through a Creepypasta story. A story primarily made for popularity.

This story is stupidity incarnate. At first I couldn't stop laughing. Then I found the originalon Wattpad. It make me sick to my stomach. It made me so mad that I looked up the author of said story. When I wrote then, they told me that all of what happened to Natalie, happened to them. Now, don't get me wrong. It's very possible that something like this Could happen. But then they went on to say that they wanted to educate people of the problem... Then I got upset. You don't educate people of Serious issues, through a Creepypasta story. A story primarily made for popularity.

3 Sonic.exe

I always thought Jeff the Virgin was awful but this? This is worse, at the least the writter of the former did tried to put an effort to the sorry while this one is pure rubbish. To even believe that Garbage.exe is somehow still popular these days, when it should've just died along with other trashpastas, is just beyond me. This genre's main audience is a bunch of edgelords who also tend to not be of mature age, I regret even liking it when I was a almost a teen during that time. (This is coming from a former fan, go watch horror movies and read horror novels not those trash because, unlike them, trashpasta faded into oblivion while horror movies beaten them in any aspect and are superior over them)

Why do people keep putting Sonic.exe in vs battles? He has no feats and like 3 or 5 overpowered abilities that any mid tier reality warper would easily laugh off.
People are also forgetting that he can be defeated by destroying the CD of his game since he did nothing more but scare people. At this point Sonic.exe is just a hilarious and pathetic character

4 Nina the Killer

How the hell is this not first? Jeff's story is overrated, but at least it was unique and well written. This story is clearly a huge ripoff of Jeff the killer. Even her catchphrase is Go To Sleep, ending with My Prince. Weren't creepy pastas meant to be scary? This is a ripoff, and her design makes her a Mary Sue. I mean, how does her hair suddenly get a purple streak in it? And why is her skirt so short? I hate this story.

This story is just awful plain and simple. For a troll pasta it would be AMAZING, but its that key word 'creepy' that ruins it. Before I read it I knew it was going to be terrible, but it was even worse than I thought. It is a rip off of Jeff the killer which isn't even a good story to begin with, she is too sexualized, the most cliche character ever, and to top it off: she is a jeff FAN GIRL. -_- I don't even like Jeff but this is really stupid.

This one really disappointed me. It sounds like a cheap remake of Jeff the Killer, only with a female character. The whole story sounds so similar to Jeff the Killer and she even has the same catch phrase as Jeff, only it ends with "my prince." So far, this is the only one I've heard that I don't care for.

5 Tails Doll

The concept isn't terrible, but it just needed someone as good as the Jeff the killer writer to write it.

Would be scary if they didn't just pick a random character and turn them evil.

I honestly couldn't stop laughing throughout the entirety of this pasta. I mean, it's a plushie that kills people. A PLUSHIE.

6 Slenderman The Slender Man is a fictional supernatural character that originated as an Internet meme created by Something Awful forums user Eric Knudsen

I actually liked the original idea of slendemran. I mean, the one which came with the photoshoped pictures in the "something awful" forums.

Just a creepy entity who may or may be not related to some incidents like children disappearances. It was mysterious enough to keep you interested.

But then he became famous and pretty much of the character got ripped of, with creepypastas where he is overpowered, basically an emo teen or just a gar stu.

Slender man is not a dumb creepypasta. He is probably one of the most best creepypastas. He's mysterious and there is a lot of mystery about him. Unlike most creepypastas that focus on humans all of a sudden turning into psychopaths. Slender is different as he was never human and he is his own kind. I completely disagree that slender man is a dumb creepypasta.

No. slenderman is not scary, creepy, or even slightly uncanny. I was in highschool when slenderman started to gain traction. my sophomore year is when he first popped up and at first it was actually pretty creepy, nothing but a series of pictures, some video, and a vague idea of what he was. but over the years he's been over exposed, over explained, and watered down to the point where he's just a caricature of what he used to be. that fact that he's only #6 is insulting. and the fact that people claim that he is one of the few pastas that "actually scared them" and "one of the greatest pastas ever" is how people talk about and describe him, just goes to prove how many 16 year old edgelords read creepypastas anymore.

7 Sally.exe

Never read it, but I can tell by the title that it's garbage.

Anything with .EXE in its name is instantly a Red Flag for me!

The moral of the story is to get your candy ass out of here.

8 Squidward's Suicide

Give me a C! Give me a L! Give me and ICHE! What does that spell? Cliche! I mean, seriously people. Why does everyone worship this thing Like it's a horror masterpiece?

The story about an intern who sees something freaky that he shouldn't have seen has happened time and time again. I don't even know why this one is so beloved! It didn't even start the cliches.

And worst yet, it has a large fan base. You cannot go on a Creepypasta forum and say something bad about this stupid thing without angry fan boys losing it on you.

This story is a swirling storm of angry flaming cliches, and it includes gore and dead children only for shock factor. They are not a major part of the story, however they are the main attraction. Because pointless violence totally makes everything scary, right guys?

Like the Abandoned Disney Theme Park piece, this starts out beautifully, very suspenseful and atmospheric. Then it remembers "oh yeah, I'm a horror story," and the shock effects start piling up until everything that was good about it disappears.

9 Jane The Killer: The Real Story

I love Jane, but the story could've been written better. At least her appearance was closer to realistic than Jeff's after a fire. People think her skin is white and her hair black, but that's the mask and wig. She is really bald. At least, in the version I heard.

Horrible. Same as Nina, she is a ripoff and a bland character with no personality at all. The thing that pisses me off the most that stories like her have no originality whatsoever, and her whole story depends on other character (Jeff).

I really found her super bland and a Mary-sue. Jeff was bad but was interesting, but this was just Boring and she even looks like a Jeff ripoff.

10 Luna Platformer

Ok look at their faces they are so creepy I mean I love MLP, but seeing this just...I... Couldn't.

Is this like Luna Game? If so, jump scares and that's it.

What? This creepypasta is just weird though. How can I get scared by that Pink Annoying Horse staring at me in the screen? It's also creepy to smile. Not creepy to get scared but I'm literally freaked out and cringed. If she screamed one more time, I'm gonna [bleep for haters].

The Contenders
11 Eyeless Jack

Let's check out the flaws of this story, shall we?

-The main character, Mitch, is not only blander than sandpaper and not interesting or likable in the slightest, but also somehow manages to function and walk perfectly WITHOUT A KIDNEY. Heck, he barely even notices it until the doctor tells him about it!

-When spotting Jack on the second night, Mitch takes a photo of him, instead of, I don't know, hitting him with something heavy, fighting back, calling the cops. And hell, why did he sleep at his brother's house the SECOND time around AFTER he had something REMOVE HIS KIDNEY at night? How about staying in the hospital? Or getting some police escort?

-Jack isn't scary. He really isn't. His appearance isn't particularly unsettling, his Modus Operandi is ludicrous and unrealistic, and we are just not given enough to actually become afraid of this character!

In conclusion, the ridiculous amount of cliches, hilariously dumb character decisions, and the plain STUPIDITY of it... made it a classic. And then the fangirl nation attacked. And is became even worse.

12 Laughing Jack Laughing Jack is the titular main antagonist of the Creepypasta story of the same name. He is a sadistic killer clown who was originally an imaginary friend to a little boy. That is until the boy forgot about him. Follow his story through being made, forgotten, and becoming a sadistic killer clown, who now seeks to murder young children.

The sins of this one include:

-It's laughably (no pun intended) overrated.

-Instead of showing us some actual chemistry between James and Jack, maybe letting the mother see them interact more, we are introduced to, wait for it, GORE! Because that's what makes a good story. Gore. Unnecessary, overly detailed gore and torture, ESPECIALLY relating to a dog and a FIVE YEAR-OLD.

-When finally meeting Jack face-to-face, the mother suddenly turns into a damn ninja.

-Yet another 'AND DEN I DYED/WANT INSANE' ending. That, and the painful overabundance of unneeded cliches such as creepy children, a nightmare sequence that has no purpose but to showcase some more gore, and the dog in the story has no purpose but to get killed. NONE.

-People actually defend this one like their only child. Really? Fangirls are that stupid?

No character development to the Jack himself or even his victims, poor writing, a lot of cliche's, unnecessary over detailed gore and tortures and why he had bunch of fangirls? He is just a clown from the box!

13 666

Is this about Username 666? but that's not even a creepypasta! it's just an edited video, and I don't think it was even intended to be a scary story or an urban legend.

Never heard of it but it sounds like it sucks.

Actually this pasta was debunked by a Youtuber.

14 Homicidal Liu

I can't stand this creepypasta. Like, really, Jeff the Killer was already a horrible story, but this contradicts every small thing of that Creepypasta. Next to that there is Pedophila in it, and it is so cliche. They want us to care about their relathionship, but they spend extremly little time on it, causing it to be boring AND creepy. That being said, it is better than most (if not all) of the " --- the killer " creepypastas, since at least the author tries to make it diffrente, and it doesn't have that silly second name thing.

Another unoriginal OC that uses another creepypasta to become popular, and as always: Probably just fangirl bait.

I like him, but maybe something could change, but I don't know what.

15 Come Play With ME (Sally)

Her creator ruined her

16 Sweet Apple Massacre
17 Nightmare Ned
18 Rouge exe

Proof that the whole "genre" can't be taken seriously anymore. Think about it, even if you think of a genuinely-liked story such as Funnymouth or Candle Cove, you have to remind yourself that it's in the same category of stories as this travesty. Seriously, trollpasta or not, this story killed Creepypasta for me.

I hope that whoever wrote this was drunk. Then they would have an excuse.

All these exe creepypastas. Damn preteens.

19 Cupcakes

This was just a gore fest and nothing but a gore fest. I could barely get through a quarter of it, because all the gore in it just got really boring and some of it unintentionally funny. Also it was painfully slow, Pinkie doesn't even have a reason to kill Rainbow Dash or any other ponies for that matter. And I don't even like MLP but this story was still awful.

This story follows in the trend of being edgy for edgy's sake like a lot of bad fanfiction/creepypasta. The only reason this story is as well known as it is is because it's from a property as popular as MLP:FiM, as well as the fact that it's the first grimdark story of this nature to get any real recognition.

Just awful. I have seen an animation of this, and if the animation was just like the story, one word, terrible, All Pinke pie does was killing rainbow dash for no good or even a bit good reason. And her scary word called "Life Is A Party" is awful. Seriously? Oh well. at least Rainbow Factory is better than Cupcakes.

20 Voicebox

I'm not kidding, this is probably the worst Creepypasta (or fanfiction in general) I have ever had the displeasure of reading. It is cliché beyond belief, doesn't make any sense, almost every character is either to corny to comprehend or is just 1 dimensional. The plot is the typical cliché romance drama, only its trying to add as much blood, raping, and killing as possible. Did I even mention its about a emo character meeting Creepypasta characters and befriending them, and marrying the Creepypasta character Ticci Toby?

21 Sonic.exe Round 2
22 Clockwork
23 Ed, Edd, and Eddy Lost Episode
24 Lavender Town Syndrome

Just not scary. How am I supposed to be scared of a SONG! Ben drowned wasn't really scary, but at least it was entertaining to read ( and watch. ) Lavender town has a creepy song, but writing a full creepy pasta on a SONG? Just doesn't cut it for me.

The thing is, it hits your subconscious. The thought of a song so high pitched and extreme that it drives people to suicide.

The whole thing was written based on one song, still, I expected more.

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