Top Ten Worst Mary Sues In Fanfiction

What is the worst Mary Sue of all time in your opinion?

The Top Ten

1 Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way

Basically the original Sue. She's got everyone in love with her, is absolutely perfect in every way, dresses in way-too-revealing clothes, everyone who hates her is punished, and is way too OP.

She turned Harry Potter into a goth vampire, and Draco Malfoy into a rock-band loving emo little creep. WAY TO RUIN HARRY POTTER FOR US, EBONY! - Diistortions

This story has GOT to be a joke, right? Well, I really hope so. I almost pity the author if not.

"I put on a black leather shirt that showed off my boobs and tiny matching mini skirt that said simple plan on the butt. You might think I'm a slut but I'm really not." THAT were the stupidest sentences in the story. Plus everyones not even witches anymore just vampires. She's way too powerful, get's too much treatment and too many people are in love with her. Before I found her, I thought Cleo was the biggest Sue but this Sue proved me WRONG. Harry even changed his appearance like SERIOUSLY?

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2 Cleo Kapenelli

I just read her yesterday and WOW does this 13 year old teenager not know what a Mary Sue is. She said it's someone who is impossible to kill and her's isn't just because she's REALLY x( insert number here ) HARD TO KILL! She is the EXACT definition of both arrogant and stupid

A lazy recolor created by an obnoxious 13 year old.

Those hair highlights though

She ruined two series for me

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3 Bloom Luna

She is the biggest Sue ever! I was surprised she isn't number one!

I wish this did not exist its like hell when you look at it

She's dating everyone across multiple universes and doesn't even look like she belongs in the universe of FNAF or the Puella Magi series! And her creator is a huge jerk and weeb who only says
"Foxy-kun! " and "Nya! " and obsesses over the stupid brogres!

I just searched up Bloom Luna and now I really regret it. SHE. IS. THE. WORST. FNAF. OC. EVER! 😡😡😡 She is definitely the WORST sue the world has ever known, and her creator gets mad every time her "fans" ship her "OC" with Shrek. The creator doesn't even know that she created a Mary-Sue! Bloom Luna doesn't even LOOK like an animatronic! THIS CRAPPY OC DOESN'T EVEN DESERVE TO BE CALLED AN OC! SHE SHOULD BE NUMBER ONE, NOW! 😡😡😡

4 Reicheru

Half vampire, half demon, killed her mother when she was a baby, lives in anime world with Inyuasha, Korra, and many more, and eventually gives birth to a goddess. That's a Sue right there.

Reicheru is hillarious and so...out there. She gave birth in a Mexican Resturant to a God and went back to school like nothing happened. She is related to a lot of people and got knocked up by Inuyasha...and for some reason Goku is her father? And Korra can make rock dildos?

Reicheru means...a, hair. :3
She ruined Legend of Korra and avatar for me. - Diistortions

The fanime is what I'm most familiar with. All I can say is... Wow

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5 Starkit

The "perfect" monstrosity that falls in love with her great grandfather...

She needs to be higher on the list my god

THIS is below Ginny Weasley? The world has lost sanity. Help!

Starkit needs to be at least on the top five - Willowclaw

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6 Bella Swan

Bella swan is a TERIBBLE role model for girls, and is in an abusive relationship that is made out of lust, not love. Also, she is kinda rude and acts openly mortified when people do nice things for her. I don't really think she thought about how she hurt other people.

Wait a minute, isn't Bella Swan a canon character in the Twilight series? If I could remember clearly..

How is she lower than Ginny Weasley for god's sake! The world. It has lost its humanity.

Ehh, umm, *breath* *sigh*

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7 Princess Elizabeth the Hedgehog

One of the more well-known characters in Mary Sue-dom. Awful design, awful bio, awful creator.

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8 Jenna Silverblade

This would have been a great and interesting story if it was the story of Jenna usurping Princess Zelda. But no, it was wasted on Tiger sex motifs!

Tigers this, tigers that. Jenna is so annoying and too perfect!

9 Ginny Weasley Ginny Weasley

She was so much better in the books. All you haters, go read the books for God's sake! She was a little feisty girl who was a MAJOR geek over Harry Potter. She became good in Quidditch only because she stole her Brother's brooms and practiced. I bet she failed millions of times before she even was able to get a foot in the air. Being able to cough is in her blood! Have you noticed that Ron was able to imitate Bloody Baron? Her only friends were Luna and Hermione. Come on, how many boys liked her before Harry? Two! And they were really shaky relationships. Really tough, funny and skilled? If you're saying she's boring for that, you're basically hating on Harry and Ron. Ron and Fred and George and Charlie were awesome at Quidditch as well! Talented witch? The Golden Trio were that too! She trained as well. You're hating on Hermione saying this! In the movies, Harry and Ginny's relationship was shallow and stupid, kinda like the way that Ron was portrayed as stupid comic relief! In the ...more

Awesome at Quidditch, so pretty that numerous boys liked her, popular, really tough, funny, skilled at lying, is a "good" actress because she can cough like Umbridge, and was a very talented witch. Have to agree with this one. After her first few years, she wasn't shy or naive anymore and had pretty much no flaws. The perfect image of a Mary Sue.

No... Just no.
So I was watching the movies and all that and then out off nowhere Ginny was kissing Harry! All I did was blink!

10 Twila Beautiful Psycho Topaz Cullen

This is below GINNY WEASLEY? The world has gone crazy.

This should be at least in the top tens. At LEAST.

Words alone cannot express the brain cells I lost reading this fic. Probably because I lost the use of words along with every word I read.

She calls Tara Gilesbie a 'grate riter'. Do I really need to say anything else? 'Twila the girl who waz in love with a Vampyre' truly is a sue master piece.

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The Newcomers

? Ashianna Aquaris

The mary sue of the winx fandom obviously a bloom copy cat. Think of bloom but replace her powers with water powers. And seriously "fairy of walter stars"? Isn't Arcadia already the guardian of the water stars?

? Shenzi Tuck

Terrible character. Funny how BrainyxBat made Shenzi into a Mary Sue, if the actual character from The Lion King wasn't bad enough.

The Contenders

11 Atlantiana "Tiana" Rebekah Loren

Falls in love with Edward, long name, ridiculously pretty, constantly denies being pretty, the usual Sue traits.

12 Ariana Black

Nothing goes wrong for this girl! She has "superpowers" as an empath (what the HELL is an empath?! ), everyone loves her, Voldemort (yes Voldemort) decided she was more important than Harry and went after her instead...the list goes on and on. And she actually admits that she's better than everyone else. I would like her to just die in a fire.


13 Dark Yagami

Seriously? Dark Yagami? That is obviously just Light Yagami turned dark.

Related to a canon character and everyone loves him. I haven't read this fic in a while, though.


Absolutely deserves to be here. Maybe even a bigger Sue/Stu than Enoby, but the fic is so convoluted that nobody can really tell. - Winterush

14 Nina The Killer

Obvious result of fangirls writing a self-insert. It's glaringly obvious just by looking at her name. I know little about her except her appearance, but I can tell she's not gonna be likes by me.

I like Jane a lot better than her. And Nina's ponytail makes her look like Kyoko Sakura from Madoka Magica - MLPFan

@Below Dipped in rainbows, covered in sugar, and put into a flower shop. - Diistortions

It's 'ok' when there is two 'the killer' s(jeff and Jane) but three is overkill!

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15 Brellisia Sparkel

"Literally the worst, a newcomer (is only like two days old lol) and already cancer. The creator is ten years old, and when she was told that she had to be thirteen she started lying and saying that she was 13.

NEEDS MORE VOTES. Stop the Sue before it spreads.

Just... look her up on Deviantart. Huge sue.

Just looked up this piece of crap. I want to die.

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16 Sara Star

Listen to this, folks! She's a shinobi, stronger than legendary Pokemon, half demon, half angel, same name as the author, richest person in the whole world, best friends with canon, abandoned by her parents, all that jazz! Isn't she PERFECT?

17 Elena Gilbert

"Every road leads back to Elena" and ruins every character involved with her. Her death seriously would contribute a lot more than any of her status as a doppelgänger.

18 Alex

Creator is awful, and the character got pregnant at 13, apparently. Also a self-insert, a goth, a diclonius, a Panty and Stocking recolor, and dating guys who are way too old for her.

The only thing I'm ok with is the name, and even that's overused to all oblivion.

19 Jessica Hawk

Hunger Games OC, as good as Katniss and Gale, lives with the Everdeens, her traits are EXTREMELY sueish, is dating Gale, uses VERY overused weapons, has a VERY overused District and backstory, and shes so good she could have fixed the entire plot by volunteering and killing everyone the first day. Dear god.

20 Renesmee Carlie Cullen

You thought Bella was a Mary Sue? Well, have you met her daughter? Because she is the most perfect specimen. At first she's the most unique creature to exist, but then demoted to most unique creature of her species. Everyone who meets her falls in love almost at cult status. She can never get hurt, never throws a tantrum, never does anything but exist and yet everyone treats her like the second coming of Jesus. To me no one will trump this blatant Mary Sue there only because of lazy writing and antiquated gender roles.

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