Top Ten Worst Mary Sues In Fanfiction

What is the worst Mary Sue of all time in your opinion?

The Top Ten Worst Mary Sues In Fanfiction

1 Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way

Well, of course she is first. She is literally why the word Mary-Sue got invented.

Basically the original Sue. She's got everyone in love with her, is absolutely perfect in every way, dresses in way-too-revealing clothes, everyone who hates her is punished, and is way too OP.

This girl... she is the bloody DEFINITION of Mary Sue. Ask anyone what a Mary Sue is, and they'll instantly reply with "Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way". It's that bad.

She turned Harry Potter into a goth vampire, and Draco Malfoy into a rock-band loving emo little creep. WAY TO RUIN HARRY POTTER FOR US, EBONY! - Diistortions

2 Cleo Kapenelli

I just read her yesterday and WOW does this 13 year old teenager not know what a Mary Sue is. She said it's someone who is impossible to kill and her's isn't just because she's REALLY x( insert number here ) HARD TO KILL! She is the EXACT definition of both arrogant and stupid

A lazy recolor created by an obnoxious 13 year old.

Those hair highlights though

She ruined two series for me

3 Twila Beautiful Psycho Topaz Cullen

This is below GINNY WEASLEY? The world has gone crazy.

This should be at least in the top tens. At LEAST.

That name alone... - Jasmine21064

Words alone cannot express the brain cells I lost reading this fic. Probably because I lost the use of words along with every word I read.

4 Bloom Luna

She is the biggest Sue ever! I was surprised she isn't number one!

I wish this did not exist its like hell when you look at it

Just found her today and I hate her.

She is a FNAF Mary Sue - Lunala

5 Starkit

The "perfect" monstrosity that falls in love with her great grandfather...

THIS is below Ginny Weasley? The world has lost sanity. Help!

She needs to be higher on the list my god

Eh. Why the flying #%$& is she so low on the list?

6 Reicheru

Some unknown abomination that is apparently an all powerful goddess who cheats on Denmark with Inuyasha yet nobody calls her out or cares. Amazing.

Half vampire, half demon, killed her mother when she was a baby, lives in anime world with Inyuasha, Korra, and many more, and eventually gives birth to a goddess. That's a Sue right there.

Reicheru is hillarious and so...out there. She gave birth in a Mexican Resturant to a God and went back to school like nothing happened. She is related to a lot of people and got knocked up by Inuyasha...and for some reason Goku is her father? And Korra can make rock dildos?

Reicheru means...a, hair. :3
She ruined Legend of Korra and avatar for me. - Diistortions

7 Bella Swan

Bella swan is a TERIBBLE role model for girls, and is in an abusive relationship that is made out of lust, not love. Also, she is kinda rude and acts openly mortified when people do nice things for her. I don't really think she thought about how she hurt other people.

Wait a minute, isn't Bella Swan a canon character in the Twilight series? If I could remember clearly..

How is she lower than Ginny Weasley for god's sake! The world. It has lost its humanity.

Biggest Mary Sue ever

8 Rey Rey is a fictional character in the Star Wars franchise, portrayed by British actress Daisy Ridley. First appearing as the central character in Star Wars: The Force Awakens, Rey is a scavenger who was left behind on the planet Jakku when she was a child, and later becomes involved with the Resistance's more.

One of the most shallow and poorly conceived characters. Its like she has the ability to drain the skills and abilities of people around her and be good at what they do. - direguy

Her picture is next the to the definition of Mary Sue. How hard would it have been to compile a couple of training montages?

A 100 million dollar fan fiction

Oh. My. God... Rey should be number one! She beat a trained sith regardless of his injuries and knows the Falcon better than Han himself! Don’t even get me started on how she knows the force and how can she fly a ship if she was on Jake her entire life! Rey is ruining Star Wars for me, never let Disney take control...

9 Princess Elizabeth the Hedgehog

This character is as atrocious as her creator's behavior--both need to be sealed away for the safety of humanity.

One of the more well-known characters in Mary Sue-dom. Awful design, awful bio, awful creator.

She the worst

10 Atlantiana "Tiana" Rebekah Loren

Falls in love with Edward, long name, ridiculously pretty, constantly denies being pretty, the usual Sue traits.

She’s just as bad as Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way. I’m serious.
For anyone who doesn’t believe me, read Forbidden fruit: the temptation of Edward Cullen.

The Contenders

11 Ginny Weasley

She was so much better in the books. All you haters, go read the books for God's sake! She was a little feisty girl who was a MAJOR geek over Harry Potter. She became good in Quidditch only because she stole her Brother's brooms and practiced. I bet she failed millions of times before she even was able to get a foot in the air. Being able to cough is in her blood! Have you noticed that Ron was able to imitate Bloody Baron? Her only friends were Luna and Hermione. Come on, how many boys liked her before Harry? Two! And they were really shaky relationships. Really tough, funny and skilled? If you're saying she's boring for that, you're basically hating on Harry and Ron. Ron and Fred and George and Charlie were awesome at Quidditch as well! Talented witch? The Golden Trio were that too! She trained as well. You're hating on Hermione saying this! In the movies, Harry and Ginny's relationship was shallow and stupid, kinda like the way that Ron was portrayed as stupid comic relief! In the ...more

Awesome at Quidditch, so pretty that numerous boys liked her, popular, really tough, funny, skilled at lying, is a "good" actress because she can cough like Umbridge, and was a very talented witch. Have to agree with this one. After her first few years, she wasn't shy or naive anymore and had pretty much no flaws. The perfect image of a Mary Sue.

Seriously? Why is she even on this list, when it says "Top Ten Mary Sues in Fanfiction"? How did she even get on this list? Goddammit, Harmoanians.

No... Just no.
So I was watching the movies and all that and then out off nowhere Ginny was kissing Harry! All I did was blink!

12 Jenna Silverblade

This would have been a great and interesting story if it was the story of Jenna usurping Princess Zelda. But no, it was wasted on Tiger sex motifs!

Tigers this, tigers that. Jenna is so annoying and too perfect!

13 Nina The Killer

Obvious result of fangirls writing a self-insert. It's glaringly obvious just by looking at her name. I know little about her except her appearance, but I can tell she's not gonna be likes by me.

I like Jane a lot better than her. And Nina's ponytail makes her look like Kyoko Sakura from Madoka Magica - MLPFan

@Below Dipped in rainbows, covered in sugar, and put into a flower shop. - Diistortions

She's just a female version of Jeff

14 Ariana Black

Nothing goes wrong for this girl! She has "superpowers" as an empath (what the HELL is an empath?! ), everyone loves her, Voldemort (yes Voldemort) decided she was more important than Harry and went after her instead...the list goes on and on. And she actually admits that she's better than everyone else. I would like her to just die in a fire.


15 Dark Yagami

Seriously? Dark Yagami? That is obviously just Light Yagami turned dark.

Related to a canon character and everyone loves him. I haven't read this fic in a while, though.


Absolutely deserves to be here. Maybe even a bigger Sue/Stu than Enoby, but the fic is so convoluted that nobody can really tell. - Winterush

16 Sara Star

Listen to this, folks! She's a shinobi, stronger than legendary Pokemon, half demon, half angel, same name as the author, richest person in the whole world, best friends with canon, abandoned by her parents, all that jazz! Isn't she PERFECT?

17 Brellisia Sparkel

"Literally the worst, a newcomer (is only like two days old lol) and already cancer. The creator is ten years old, and when she was told that she had to be thirteen she started lying and saying that she was 13.

NEEDS MORE VOTES. Stop the Sue before it spreads.

Just... look her up on Deviantart. Huge sue.

Just looked up this piece of crap. I want to die.

18 Kara Suman Hamilton

I really hope this person actually did research on Hamilton
There's a bloody MUSICAL on Hamilton
Please do not waste your time reading this fanfic
It's horrible

If this isn’t a troll Sue, the author needs mental help. She’s OP, described as “your average 1800s girl” despite wearing a MINISKIRT! Burn this horrid trash heap

Thank God that the author stopped updating her story
She’s the long lost daughter of Maria Reynolds and Alexander Hamilton who travels back in time to 1776 (the duel was in 1804 by the way, but the author has never read a history book and it’s super obvious)
She turned Maria into a useless drunk witch, and Laurens, Laf, and Herc into idiotic creeps only there to have you-know-what with Kara.
She’s also a witch with magic powers who is traveling back in time for ‘family fun’ aka sex with her DAD! Google this abomination for yourselves, it’s worse than words can describe

19 Alex

Creator is awful, and the character got pregnant at 13, apparently. Also a self-insert, a goth, a diclonius, a Panty and Stocking recolor, and dating guys who are way too old for her.

The only thing I'm ok with is the name, and even that's overused to all oblivion.


My name's Alex and I'm starting to feel ashamed of using it...

20 Elena Gilbert

"Every road leads back to Elena" and ruins every character involved with her. Her death seriously would contribute a lot more than any of her status as a doppelgänger.

21 Hayley Marshall
22 Sonichu Sonichu is allegedly the most powerful anime character of all time. He was created by Christine Weston Chandler, mostly well-known as Chris-Chan in the Sonic the Hedgehog community. It's a combination of Sonic and Pikachu, which makes him unstoppable.

Thank you for reminding me of this abomination from the deepest depths of hell -_-

23 Jessica Hawk

Hunger Games OC, as good as Katniss and Gale, lives with the Everdeens, her traits are EXTREMELY sueish, is dating Gale, uses VERY overused weapons, has a VERY overused District and backstory, and shes so good she could have fixed the entire plot by volunteering and killing everyone the first day. Dear god.

24 Angel McCloud Madain Aran

Obviously one of the WORST so far! She has the most clíche and ridiculous backstory story, non-flawed body, her adoptive parent is Samus Aran but is a Arctic Vixen/angel, and if Fox McCloud's wife. She HATES Krystal and wants to call out on her every time she makes a story. She is probably the most terrible self-insert in fanfiction.

I've read her fanfictions before, and oh god, everyone is hilariously out of charecter (especially when it comes to writing Krystal). She writes Krystal as a mean and envious girlfriend who is a slut. It's actually very funny unintentionally.

25 Kisara Haruno

Just read this fanfic of cliches and an annoying little Mary Sue who is classified as "different":

26 Maggie Pesky

Uses her own murder victim’s corpse as a literal puppet during the very same trial that she ends up being put on for murdering said victim, yet she STILL manages to get away with it - xandermartin98

In the "Buzz On How Maggie Got" series - xandermartin98

27 Dilara D'Celli

Just awful and an obvious self-insert!

28 Renesmee Carlie Cullen

You thought Bella was a Mary Sue? Well, have you met her daughter? Because she is the most perfect specimen. At first she's the most unique creature to exist, but then demoted to most unique creature of her species. Everyone who meets her falls in love almost at cult status. She can never get hurt, never throws a tantrum, never does anything but exist and yet everyone treats her like the second coming of Jesus. To me no one will trump this blatant Mary Sue there only because of lazy writing and antiquated gender roles.

29 Screwball

From Daughter of Discord. She manages to get a guy in weeks and somehow makes him turn against his mother in seconds, because that will obviously happen in real life.

30 Mira

From that FNaF wattpad comic 'Broken Memories'. She's a typical person. She's such a flawless brat.

31 Ticci Toby

The writer doesn't even know what Tourettes is! The only time they show up is in backstory to explain that he had an oh-so-tragic childhood and had to be homeschooled. Also, his big sister Lyra died. Also, he's a proxy. MASKY AND HOODIE ARE SLENDERMAN'S PROXIES. YOU DON'T NEED TO INSERT YOURSELF WITH THE POPULAR PEOPLE. Also, you don't kill people just because voices in your head tell you to. That's unrealistic, even if your dad was a jerk, you still have a blood connection to him. And it appears we're supposed to feel sorry for him. Dude, we're shown nothing that tells us we should feel sorry for him.
And gas mask and googles. For no reason. Stop trying to be edgy. Of course, it could be because he MAY have died in a fire, or may have been saved by Slenderman. Either way, even more Mary Sue-ish.

32 MarryAnn Maleficent
33 Kamora Eudora

A very well known and ship thirsty Mary Sue that hops around in the twitter, deviantart and Tumblr community. Even worse than those sue, is her mun...

34 Michaela (Story of Evil)

She's not from a fanfic and is from a vocaloid song/manga series by mothy (Akuno-P) but still. She's beautiful, everyone loves her to the point they'd lick her shoes and would get out of their way to protect her or pretty much worship her, all of the single men in story are desperately in love with her at first sight, she's the most popular girl in the country to the point she's called the Diva of Elphegort and the Daughter of Green, she's treated like a goddess, the very few people who hate her only hate because they're jealous at her greatness, a young king who was already engaged with another girl wanted to leave his fiancee and leave his kingdom to be with Michaela, her so called "flaws" don't give her REAL problems and just small short term problems that are far from bad or influential to the story or her character, she has a very beautiful singing voice, she was formerly an immortal spirit, according to the story she is the best mansion maid to have, she gets shoehorned to the ...more - MLPFan

35 Allie Lane

Such a classic Sue has all the tropes he’s changing colour vampire dark side etc

36 Shui Lan Er/Aquarius

She's the biologic twin of Ginny, who was a goddess in her past life, doesn't have red hair and is the Slytherin queen. Most pretty, most popular, most powerful of all. Mary Sue and nothing else. (And that story bashes Gryffindor, Weasleys, and many others) - AshleyChang


37 Orlina Evil

Ugh! I hate her! If the author of this horrible OC ever found this, I will never regret adding her name onto the list.

Why she is a Mary Sue:
- is oh so beautiful and sexy
- can turn into a ghost even though she is a devil
- can turn into a vampire
- is a ninja
- is a warrior
- is the Queen of Hell
- has a dad who dotes on her
- has her Diamond Queen mom dead
- has an overprotective and charming boyfriend
- everybody loves her
- everybody who hates her will be tormented
- is the the bad girl everybody loves
- gets complimented every single time
- OP
- has a good counterpart that is a superhero
- the author describes her as beautiful as always

One time a came upon a book of hers where the author said that she will suicide if nobody reads her books. If she wants to know why they don't want to read her books then here it is. Also when I told her to take a Mary Sue test, she's being a brat and guess what? She deleted the ...more

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39 Antonina "Nina" Jackson
40 Dovewing Dovewing is a character in the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. She has light grey fur with Amber, green, or blue eyes. Her first appearance is in the fourth arc, know as Omen of the Stars, in the book The Fourth Apprentice. She was part of the Power of Three, and her power was to hear and see things more.

Ladies and Gentlemen, presenting to you such a perfect character she is on a list about Fanfiction characters!

41 Mika Koizumi

She's from a wattpad B-Dman crossfire fanfiction named "First Love". I didn't mind her at first, but later, at the halfway(until the end)of chapter 1 and the whole chapter 2(the story currently has 2 chapters, It's been a long time, but they might make more chapters soon) she ends up being a mary sue. Why? Well, "She's so beautiful! ", "How did she got her hair like that? Ringlet ends and rainbows highlights are SO cute! ", "Having pink eyes(no, as in pink eye color)Is so rare! ", "She's the first female b shooter with a dragon type! ", "You're Dragrom has a finishing move that looks pretty much only shooting rainbow reflections! That's so cool and rare! ","So you live in the forest? ! ", and those are examples of some things about Mika, expressed by sentence.
And there are so many things. In fact If the B Daman franchise had some sort of crossover with the Twilight saga, If Aona Day or Natsumi Inaba(I still like Aona and Natsumi, also Rory)are not Bella Swan, this mary sueish OC ...more - MLPFan

42 Bailey the Skeleton

(Undertale)I do not want to be mean, but you should search it yourself. Bailey was a complete Sans ripoff and she has befriended all the characters in Undertale. It was not mentioned, but the creator's other art shows something of her being in a relationship with W.D Gaster, Who is dead, How can you marry a dead person? She hates Chara and anything relating to her, and her weakness is not mentioned either. I will tell you more of the creator's bad stuff later, I am currently getting a headache.

43 Hyenas Master

TheHyenasSBE's self insert. Not very creative at all. Simply just Shenzi, Banzai and Ed all mixed in one guy, and even doesn't have a proper name, he's just called Hyenas Master, or HM for short.

44 Shenzi Tuck

Terrible character. Funny how BrainyxBat made Shenzi into a Mary Sue, if the actual character from The Lion King wasn't bad enough.

45 Ashianna Aquaris

The mary sue of the winx fandom obviously a bloom copy cat. Think of bloom but replace her powers with water powers. And seriously "fairy of walter stars"? Isn't Arcadia already the guardian of the water stars?

46 Erza Scarlet Erza Scarlet is an S-Class Mage from the infamous magic guild Fairy Tail. Erza starts off as a lone wolf and stays loyal to following the rules. As the story develops Erza changes into loving mage strong and independent. As her terrible past haunts her she ignores her Nakama's calls that they want help. more.
47 Rose Cinderella - Regal Academy
48 D.Va D.Va is a playable character appearing in the 2016 video game Overwatch, a first-person shooter video game developed by Blizzard Entertainment.
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