Top Ten Worst Mary Sues In Fanfiction

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21 Hayley Marshall
22 Dilara D'Celli

Just awful and an obvious self-insert!

23 Mira

From that FNaF wattpad comic 'Broken Memories'. She's a typical person. She's such a flawless brat.

24 Angel McCloud Madain Aran

Obviously one of the WORST so far! She has the most clíche and ridiculous backstory story, non-flawed body, her adoptive parent is Samus Aran but is a Arctic Vixen/angel, and if Fox McCloud's wife. She HATES Krystal and wants to call out on her every time she makes a story. She is probably the most terrible self-insert in fanfiction.

25 MarryAnn Maleficent
26 Kisara Haruno

Just read this fanfic of cliches and an annoying little Mary Sue who is classified as "different":

27 Kara Suman Hamilton

If this isn’t a troll Sue, the author needs mental help. She’s OP, described as “your average 1800s girl” despite wearing a MINISKIRT! Burn this horrid trash heap

Thank God that the author stopped updating her story
She’s the long lost daughter of Maria Reynolds and Alexander Hamilton who travels back in time to 1776 (the duel was in 1804 by the way, but the author has never read a history book and it’s super obvious)
She turned Maria into a useless drunk witch, and Laurens, Laf, and Herc into idiotic creeps only there to have you-know-what with Kara.
She’s also a witch with magic powers who is traveling back in time for ‘family fun’ aka sex with her DAD! Google this abomination for yourselves, it’s worse than words can describe

28 Ivy Smith
29 Antonina "Nina" Jackson
30 Ticci Toby

The writer doesn't even know what Tourettes is! The only time they show up is in backstory to explain that he had an oh-so-tragic childhood and had to be homeschooled. Also, his big sister Lyra died. Also, he's a proxy. MASKY AND HOODIE ARE SLENDERMAN'S PROXIES. YOU DON'T NEED TO INSERT YOURSELF WITH THE POPULAR PEOPLE. Also, you don't kill people just because voices in your head tell you to. That's unrealistic, even if your dad was a jerk, you still have a blood connection to him. And it appears we're supposed to feel sorry for him. Dude, we're shown nothing that tells us we should feel sorry for him.
And gas mask and googles. For no reason. Stop trying to be edgy. Of course, it could be because he MAY have died in a fire, or may have been saved by Slenderman. Either way, even more Mary Sue-ish.

31 Dovewing Dovewing Dovewing is a character in the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. She is part of the Power of Three, and has a sister, Ivypool.

Ladies and Gentlemen, presenting to you such a perfect character she is on a list about Fanfiction characters!

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33 Sonichu Sonichu Sonichu is allegedly the most powerful anime character of all time. He was created by Christine Weston Chandler, mostly well-known as Chris-Chan in the Sonic the Hedgehog community. It's a combination of Sonic and Pikatchu, which makes him unstoppable.
34 Bailey the Skeleton

(Undertale)I do not want to be mean, but you should search it yourself. Bailey was a complete Sans ripoff and she has befriended all the characters in Undertale. It was not mentioned, but the creator's other art shows something of her being in a relationship with W.D Gaster, Who is dead, How can you marry a dead person? She hates Chara and anything relating to her, and her weakness is not mentioned either. I will tell you more of the creator's bad stuff later, I am currently getting a headache.

35 Kamora Eudora

A very well known and ship thirsty Mary Sue that hops around in the twitter, deviantart and Tumblr community. Even worse than those sue, is her mun...

36 Michaela (Story of Evil)

She's not from a fanfic and is from a vocaloid song/manga series by mothy (Akuno-P) but still. She's beautiful, everyone loves her to the point they'd lick her shoes and would get out of their way to protect her or pretty much worship her, all of the single men in story are desperately in love with her at first sight, she's the most popular girl in the country to the point she's called the Diva of Elphegort and the Daughter of Green, she's treated like a goddess, the very few people who hate her only hate because they're jealous at her greatness, a young king who was already engaged with another girl wanted to leave his fiancee and leave his kingdom to be with Michaela, her so called "flaws" don't give her REAL problems and just small short term problems that are far from bad or influential to the story or her character, she has a very beautiful singing voice, she was formerly an immortal spirit, according to the story she is the best mansion maid to have, she gets shoehorned to the ...more - MLPFan

37 Hyenas Master

TheHyenasSBE's self insert. Not very creative at all. Simply just Shenzi, Banzai and Ed all mixed in one guy, and even doesn't have a proper name, he's just called Hyenas Master, or HM for short.

38 Shenzi Tuck

Terrible character. Funny how BrainyxBat made Shenzi into a Mary Sue, if the actual character from The Lion King wasn't bad enough.

39 Ashianna Aquaris

The mary sue of the winx fandom obviously a bloom copy cat. Think of bloom but replace her powers with water powers. And seriously "fairy of walter stars"? Isn't Arcadia already the guardian of the water stars?

40 Screwball

From Daughter of Discord. She manages to get a guy in weeks and somehow makes him turn against his mother in seconds, because that will obviously happen in real life.

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