Assassins Creed: Terror: Memory 2 (A friend)

2storm At Animus.
Hank Croce: What I can't already be dead!
Lady: Hello you need a break.
Hank: Yes.
Lady: You never wake up while in the Animus unless I say.
Hank: What then when do I wake?
Lady: I will appear in the memory. So take a break.
Hank: Sure.
He goes to the kitchen.
Man: No you are not aloud in hear.
Hank: Why?
Man: Just no.
20 Min. Later
Hank: I'm ready to go in the Animus.
Lady: Lay down.

At a Mongol Camp.
Ftut Isile is on a board.
Ftut: Ahh!
Mongolian: Stop screaming you little kid.
Ftut: Ahh Mom, Byermn.
Mongolian: They are dead you stupid kid.
The mom is alive beside him on a board.
Mom: Ftut.
Ftut: Mom.
Mom: I will be ok just you need to find the Creed.
Ftut: Mom you need to go.
A boy screams: STOP!
All the Mongolians look at the kid.
Ftut notices his mom is gone. He then runs off into the woods.

1 day later. A boy is running in the woods.
Ftut: Hello who are you?Genghis Khan: The kid who saved you and your mother.
Ftut: Ok.
Genghis: Now I got to go I will get you food just wait.

Ftut: How can I trust you?
Genghis: Seriously I just saved your butt.

So tell me if this series is good so far.

Comments

It's good, but introduce the Templar - visitor

Good - bobbythebrony