Top Ten Worst Mary Sues In Fanfiction

What is the worst Mary Sue of all time in your opinion?
The Top Ten
1 Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way

Everything the many readers of My Immortal said is absolutely true; Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way is the epitome of a bad OC. Not only is she unbearably whiny to the point of making any readers shoot themselves in the head, she's also treated like she's Gods greatest gift. Not to mention, she's an insult to the goth sub-culture.

Basically the original Sue. She's got everyone in love with her, is absolutely perfect in every way, dresses in way-too-revealing clothes, everyone who hates her is punished, and is way too OP.

2 Cleo Kapenelli

I just read her yesterday and WOW does this 13 year old teenager not know what a Mary Sue is. She said it's someone who is impossible to kill and her's isn't just because she's REALLY x( insert number here ) HARD TO KILL! She is the EXACT definition of both arrogant and stupid

Just...just no. If you make a mary-sue, can you at least respect the English language whilst you're at it?

A lazy recolor created by an obnoxious 13 year old.

3 Twila Beautiful Psycho Topaz Cullen

She and her 'true love' marry by surprise marriage, she kills Bella then EATS HER BED, to hide the evidence, states she is not a 'trol' she is a 'vampyre', Alice turns into a 'Psycho Lesbian' for one chapter, she has topaz eyes, (hence her fourth name)... god this is just a troll fic.

Words alone cannot express the brain cells I lost reading this fic. Probably because I lost the use of words along with every word I read.

She calls Tara Gilesbie a 'grate riter'. Do I really need to say anything else? 'Twila the girl who waz in love with a Vampyre' truly is a sue master piece.

4 Bloom Luna

She's dating everyone across multiple universes and doesn't even look like she belongs in the universe of FNAF or the Puella Magi series! And her creator is a huge jerk and weeb who only says
"Foxy-kun! " and "Nya! " and obsesses over the stupid brogres!

She is the biggest Sue ever! I was surprised she isn't number one!

Just found her today and I hate her.

5 Starkit

I'm not trying to be rude, just giving my review of the character. She is purple and has color-changing eyes, which is perfectly impossible. She beat Blackstar with absolutely no training, and even beat Firestar - like, what the heck? She hunts only for herself, and I don't know why every cat loves her so much! She is such a jerk, especially since she came back to camp and ignored her own Clan. She was made a warrior at 6 moons and a leader at 6 moons, and made her best friend a warrior and deputy without an apprentice. She didn't even have an apprentice herself! She cares more about fate than the good side, following Tigerkit when she thought her destiny was to be evil. Most protagonists are supposed to try to escape their fate and be good no matter what. Starkit is so spoiled, and I cannot believe xxdarkrosesx compares her to Jesus. (Besides, Warriors only uses words like "ruthless", "merciless", "heartless", not "evil" lol). Also, I cannot believe that the writer thinks if we don't like the story, we're Satanists. Like, smh, everyone can have an opinion, dude! Her character is just... so bland. Thank you for reading, and may StarClan light your path.

P.S: Firestar was amazing in the series, but he sucked in Starkit's Prophecy. I'm sorry.

-Dreamcloud of StarClan

6 Rey Rey is a fictional character in the Star Wars franchise, portrayed by British actress Daisy Ridley. First appearing as the central character in Star Wars: The Force Awakens, Rey is a scavenger who was left behind on the planet Jakku when she was a child, and later becomes involved with the Resistance's... read more

Oh. My. God... Rey should be number one! She beat a trained sith regardless of his injuries and knows the Falcon better than Han himself! Don't even get me started on how she knows the force and how can she fly a ship if she was on Jake her entire life! Rey is ruining Star Wars for me, never let Disney take control...

One of the most shallow and poorly conceived characters. Its like she has the ability to drain the skills and abilities of people around her and be good at what they do.

Her picture is next the to the definition of Mary Sue. How hard would it have been to compile a couple of training montages?

7 Bella Swan

Bella swan is a TERIBBLE role model for girls, and is in an abusive relationship that is made out of lust, not love. Also, she is kinda rude and acts openly mortified when people do nice things for her. I don't really think she thought about how she hurt other people.

Would award her the Maryest of Mary Sue's, but her daughter took that title from her—now she's just a Mary Sue famous for being popular and the worst writing in history. I'd almost argue that she doesn't belong here because she's not a fanfiction created character, but let's be honest,the entire Twilight Saga is basically just a crappy fanfic that had the unfortunatence of getting published and out to the public.

8 Reicheru

Reicheru is hillarious and so...out there. She gave birth in a Mexican Resturant to a God and went back to school like nothing happened. She is related to a lot of people and got knocked up by Inuyasha...and for some reason Goku is her father? And Korra can make rock dildos?

Half vampire, half demon, killed her mother when she was a baby, lives in anime world with Inyuasha, Korra, and many more, and eventually gives birth to a goddess. That's a Sue right there.

Some unknown abomination that is apparently an all powerful goddess who cheats on Denmark with Inuyasha yet nobody calls her out or cares. Amazing.

9 Princess Elizabeth the Hedgehog

This character is as atrocious as her creator's behavior--both need to be sealed away for the safety of humanity.

One of the more well-known characters in Mary Sue-dom. Awful design, awful bio, awful creator.

10 Atlantiana "Tiana" Rebekah Loren

She's just as bad as Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way. I'm serious.
For anyone who doesn't believe me, read Forbidden fruit: the temptation of Edward Cullen.

Falls in love with Edward, long name, ridiculously pretty, constantly denies being pretty, the usual Sue traits.

The Contenders
11 Ginny Weasley Ginny Weasley is a prominent character in the "Harry Potter" series by J.K. Rowling. She is the youngest child and only daughter of the Weasley family. Initially introduced as a shy girl with a crush on Harry Potter, Ginny develops into a strong, independent young woman. Skilled in magic and Quidditch,... read more

She was so much better in the books. All you haters, go read the books for God's sake! She was a little feisty girl who was a MAJOR geek over Harry Potter. She became good in Quidditch only because she stole her Brother's brooms and practiced. I bet she failed millions of times before she even was able to get a foot in the air. Being able to cough is in her blood! Have you noticed that Ron was able to imitate Bloody Baron? Her only friends were Luna and Hermione. Come on, how many boys liked her before Harry? Two! And they were really shaky relationships. Really tough, funny and skilled? If you're saying she's boring for that, you're basically hating on Harry and Ron. Ron and Fred and George and Charlie were awesome at Quidditch as well! Talented witch? The Golden Trio were that too! She trained as well. You're hating on Hermione saying this! In the movies, Harry and Ginny's relationship was shallow and stupid, kinda like the way that Ron was portrayed as stupid comic relief! In the books, it built up, right from the time that Ginny stood up for him when she was twelve? A Mary Sue? No way! Not in the books she is!

12 Jenna Silverblade

This would have been a great and interesting story if it was the story of Jenna usurping Princess Zelda. But no, it was wasted on Tiger sex motifs!

Tigers this, tigers that. Jenna is so annoying and too perfect!

13 Nina The Killer

Obvious result of fangirls writing a self-insert. It's glaringly obvious just by looking at her name. I know little about her except her appearance, but I can tell she's not gonna be likes by me.

Ah, yes. Now we move on to this physical manifestation of every Jeff the Killer fangirls "wet dreams". Sadly, if this girl met Jeff, she would probably be found days later in a body bag.

I like Jane a lot better than her. And Nina's ponytail makes her look like Kyoko Sakura from Madoka Magica

14 Dark Yagami

Absolutely deserves to be here. Maybe even a bigger Sue/Stu than Enoby, but the fic is so convoluted that nobody can really tell.

Seriously? Dark Yagami? That is obviously just Light Yagami turned dark.

Related to a canon character and everyone loves him. I haven't read this fic in a while, though.

15 Ariana Black

Nothing goes wrong for this girl! She has "superpowers" as an empath (what the HELL is an empath?! ), everyone loves her, Voldemort (yes Voldemort) decided she was more important than Harry and went after her instead...the list goes on and on. And she actually admits that she's better than everyone else. I would like her to just die in a fire.

16 Brellisia Sparkel

"Literally the worst, a newcomer (is only like two days old lol) and already cancer. The creator is ten years old, and when she was told that she had to be thirteen she started lying and saying that she was 13.

Just looked up this piece of crap. I want to die.

Just... look her up on Deviantart. Huge sue.

17 Sonichu Sonichu is allegedly the most powerful anime character of all time. He was created by Christine Weston Chandler, mostly well-known as Chris-Chan in the Sonic the Hedgehog community. It's a combination of Sonic and Pikachu, which makes him unstoppable.

Now we move on to the fictional surrogate son of Christian Weston Chandler. Sonichu once started off as a humble but flawed unintentional parody of Marvel and DC's Amalgam Comic series. However, due to his narrow-mindedness, overblown ego, and inability to take criticism, it quickly devolved into an edgy, self-centered power fantasy that deserved every criticism it received.

As for Sonichu, the character, he is the walking definition of a Gary-Stu: he is morally bankrupt, yet everyone in his hometown idolizes him. He is overpowered in terms of in-universe characters and is one of the subjects of an "Ancient Prophecy."

In short, stay away from the original Sonichu comic, and instead, read its many remakes and deconstructions; they are far more interesting.

18 Sara Star

Listen to this, folks! She's a shinobi, stronger than legendary Pokemon, half demon, half angel, same name as the author, richest person in the whole world, best friends with canon, abandoned by her parents, all that jazz! Isn't she PERFECT?

19 Kara Suman Hamilton

Thank God that the author stopped updating her story
She's the long lost daughter of Maria Reynolds and Alexander Hamilton who travels back in time to 1776 (the duel was in 1804 by the way, but the author has never read a history book and it's super obvious)
She turned Maria into a useless drunk witch, and Laurens, Laf, and Herc into idiotic creeps only there to have you-know-what with Kara.
She's also a witch with magic powers who is traveling back in time for 'family fun' aka sex with her DAD! Google this abomination for yourselves, it's worse than words can describe

20 Jessica Hawk

Hunger Games OC, as good as Katniss and Gale, lives with the Everdeens, her traits are EXTREMELY sueish, is dating Gale, uses VERY overused weapons, has a VERY overused District and backstory, and shes so good she could have fixed the entire plot by volunteering and killing everyone the first day. Dear god.

21 Alex

Creator is awful, and the character got pregnant at 13, apparently. Also a self-insert, a goth, a diclonius, a Panty and Stocking recolor, and dating guys who are way too old for her.


My name's Alex and I'm starting to feel ashamed of using it...

The only thing I'm ok with is the name, and even that's overused to all oblivion.

22 Elena Gilbert

"Every road leads back to Elena" and ruins every character involved with her. Her death seriously would contribute a lot more than any of her status as a doppelgänger.

23 Hayley Marshall
24 Angel McCloud Madain Aran

Obviously one of the WORST so far! She has the most clíche and ridiculous backstory story, non-flawed body, her adoptive parent is Samus Aran but is a Arctic Vixen/angel, and if Fox McCloud's wife. She HATES Krystal and wants to call out on her every time she makes a story. She is probably the most terrible self-insert in fanfiction.

25 Renesmee Carlie Cullen

You thought Bella was a Mary Sue? Well, have you met her daughter? Because she is the most perfect specimen. At first she's the most unique creature to exist, but then demoted to most unique creature of her species. Everyone who meets her falls in love almost at cult status. She can never get hurt, never throws a tantrum, never does anything but exist and yet everyone treats her like the second coming of Jesus. To me no one will trump this blatant Mary Sue there only because of lazy writing and antiquated gender roles.

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